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posted March 4th, 2019, 4:40 pm


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March 4th, 2019, 4:40 pm

Songdog

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One of those pages you spend a lot of time tweaking and doing redraws and edits for and still aren't happy with and immediately notice more mistakes. Oh well!

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March 4th, 2019, 4:50 pm

ChevreLune

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UM HOW DARE YOU

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March 4th, 2019, 5:04 pm

Captain Ghost

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Oh no.... fen.. i had a bad feeling but actually seeing it is worse ):

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March 4th, 2019, 5:17 pm

Sazkey88

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NOOO!!! Not Fen! T-T
*ugly sobbing*

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March 4th, 2019, 5:20 pm

ShadowStalker1128

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mmm,,,well,,, well played,,,

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view VadanDrumist's profile

March 4th, 2019, 6:03 pm

VadanDrumist

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Welp... survival of the fittest and all that.

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March 4th, 2019, 6:15 pm

gentlechaos

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1. Really heart-wrenching page
2. I love the 7th panel, the perspective, Rig's stance, the background, it all looks really amazing!
3. white wolf has babies/is preggers :/ Nature is really horrible sometimes
4. Please stop making me sad Songdog! Dangit :D

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March 4th, 2019, 7:03 pm

XRed-moon

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jeez. the feels have been ripped out of me.
honestly should have expected it but mmmmmmmmm.

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view LordOfPandemonium21's profile

March 4th, 2019, 9:11 pm

LordOfPandemonium21

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Why!!!

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March 4th, 2019, 9:15 pm

YolkenEgg

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Is it time for zombie Fen or is it time for Pace to be right?

Maybe it's time for Rig to stand and watch Fen die, then bring his corpse.

The rot's somewhere inside, all right.

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March 4th, 2019, 11:05 pm

DrippingGalaxy

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YOU DARE HURT MY CINNAMON ROLL! FEEL MY WRATH YOU FILTHY ANIMALS *Uses power of the ship gods* DIIIEEEEE

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March 4th, 2019, 11:08 pm

SnowWolf01

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nooooo.. not Fen ;-;

you hit me right in the feels.......

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March 4th, 2019, 11:15 pm

Seredawolf22

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Wouldn’t that smackdown to the skull have killed her? Or is she either just dazed or doing the old run a bit and pass routine .

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March 4th, 2019, 11:17 pm

Seredawolf22

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Also Noooooo poor bean..

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view El Adri 2004's profile

March 5th, 2019, 12:12 am

El Adri 2004

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I just want to think a way to heal him...

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March 5th, 2019, 1:51 am

Skeletalwidow (Guest)

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Not saying I called the cracked skulls buuuutttt....

Yeah.

Still, I’m actually upset. Not at you, song! The sad kinda upset. Like I need some kind of closure on this if he dies. Like dead wolves/does/both. Maybe pace too. Idunno. *ugly sobbing*

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March 5th, 2019, 9:27 am

Doenut

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Things to notice from Songdog-
GentleChaos noted: White wolf is pregnant or (more likely in my opinion) to have pups. Since pups are born in late winter and come out of the den in spring.
White wolf also has her tongue bitten off when she's smacked. Meaning she'll be either lisped or mute.
Although it's sad to see Fen in this state, I doubt she could get him all the way to the forest. But if he does die, it would be quite the cycle.. Pace's mate killed by a deer, Rig's mate killed by wolves.

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March 5th, 2019, 9:51 am

Kingfish

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Oh God, his pupils are shot white... D: I know that look. Aw, poor Fen! And poor Rig; she's loosing her mate, and even more painful, she's already lost his offspring. :(

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March 5th, 2019, 6:22 pm

Yolk

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mistake 1


MY HEART IS BROKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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April 10th, 2019, 10:06 pm

Oly-RRR

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Oh nooo- I mean I should have expected this because I think I have some idea of your storytelling skills and setting up narrative conflicts by now but this is breaking my heart all the same.

Honestly after several family deaths the thing about not wanting to die alone always makes me wonder, because it's different for everyone, how close they want to be at their last moments and how they express it. I'm glad I'm reading when I'm mostly stable - I read a lot of depressing stuff on a regular basis but your stories just tug at my heart in a way that makes me think of my own life.

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